Giải FULL đề IELTS Writing - 09/09/2023

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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 - 09/09/2023

Task 1: The table below shows the number of people who reported experiencing different types of mental health issues in a particular country in 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Đề thi IELTS Writing 9/9/2023

 

The table presents data in 2021 on mental health conditions in a specific country, outlining the number of individuals affected by various disorders.

 

In terms of prevalence, anxiety stood out as the most widespread health issue, affecting a significant 500,000 people. This rate was nearly twofold the number of individuals who suffered from depression, which was at 300,000, placing it as the second most prevalent condition.

 

On the other hand, data related to the occurrence of bipolar disorder, schizophrenia, and eating disorders affected considerably fewer individuals, with 50,000, 20,000, and 15,000 cases reported, respectively. According to the statistics, obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD) had 5000 more people impacted compared to post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD).

 

In the last category, the collective number of patients who had unspecified mental health issues amounted to 100,000.

 

In summary, it seems that anxiety and depression emerged as the most prevalent mental health issues, while post-traumatic stress disorder had the lowest incidence among the listed conditions. 

 

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 - 09/09/2023

Task 2: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

 

In today's rapidly changing world, the role of education extends beyond academic success. While I acknowledge the importance of a strong academic foundation, I firmly disagree with the notion that schools should exclude practical life skills from their curriculum. 

 

First and foremost, practical life skills play a crucial role in preparing individuals for the challenges they will face in adulthood. Learning how to cook, sew provides pragmatic knowledge that directly contributes to self-sufficiency and the ability to navigate daily life without having to depend on anyone. For example, teaching students to cook nutritious meals equips them with the skills to maintain a healthy lifestyle, while dressmaking and woodworking might foster creativity and problem-solving abilities.

 

Moreover, the assumption that all children have access to their families or friends who can instruct these abilities is misguided. In today's society, numerous parents are burdened with work obligations, leaving them with limited time to spend with their offspring, let alone to teach their children these skills. Furthermore, not every child has a stable family setting or has access to well-informed friends who can provide practical guidance. Schools, therefore, serve as a crucial equalizer, ensuring that all students, regardless of their family circumstances, have access to a broad spectrum of life skills.

 

In conclusion, it is imperative that schools continue to offer practical life skills as part of their curriculum. These skills are essential for holistic development and real-world life. A well-rounded education should encompass both academic knowledge and practical life skills to prepare students for a successful and fulfilling life beyond the classroom.

 

pragmatic knowledge: kiến thức thực tế	offspring(N): con cái
self-sufficiency(N): tự túc, độc lập	circumstance(N): trường hợp
nutritious(adj): dinh dưỡng	holistic development: phát triển toàn diện
burden(v): gánh nặng	well-rounded education: nền giáo dục bao quát

 

Tổng kết 

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